I've enjoyed the reading. It's classic sci-fi: simple, honest, straightforward. The one I like most. As like 'el toque maestro' it brings vibes from old classics... 'Jonathan Livingston, I suppose'... and I like it. Well executed.
Hey Ian. I took your comment seriously, so I sat down and read Continue Him without distractions.
When I stripped away the science-fiction edge and all the surreal elements, what stayed with me was something brutally honest — and familiar.
Your story doesn’t comfort. It doesn’t explain. It puts the reader in the cockpit, in real time, and lets the consequences bleed through. That kind of narrative is rare. You don’t build meaning — you let it leak through the cracks in perception.
And yeah, I noticed the rhythm. Not formal triads, but the repetition of collapse:
Normal →
Distortion →
Collapse or rupture.
You write like someone who doesn’t build structure but lives inside one. Same here — I write in visible triads, but I think we’re wired similarly. Just different languages. Same tension.
Thanks for reading mine. I read yours. We may be standing in different corners, but we’re in the same room.
I'm sorry! I wasn't trying to jeopardize anybody's health. It was 2am and my common sense had shut off. 😅 Thank you. Imposter syndrome was kicking my ass this morning. Or maybe it was the 3 hours of sleep. Who knows? 🤷♂️
Hello, I hope you’re doing well. I’m a professional artist specializing in comics, NSFW arts (18+), sci-fi, romance , fantasy, book covers, and character design. I’m looking for commissions..I can help turn your novel into a comic also i work on covers, logos, pages, panels, and also adult works. Can I show you my works???
I've enjoyed the reading. It's classic sci-fi: simple, honest, straightforward. The one I like most. As like 'el toque maestro' it brings vibes from old classics... 'Jonathan Livingston, I suppose'... and I like it. Well executed.
Hey Ian. I took your comment seriously, so I sat down and read Continue Him without distractions.
When I stripped away the science-fiction edge and all the surreal elements, what stayed with me was something brutally honest — and familiar.
Your story doesn’t comfort. It doesn’t explain. It puts the reader in the cockpit, in real time, and lets the consequences bleed through. That kind of narrative is rare. You don’t build meaning — you let it leak through the cracks in perception.
And yeah, I noticed the rhythm. Not formal triads, but the repetition of collapse:
Normal →
Distortion →
Collapse or rupture.
You write like someone who doesn’t build structure but lives inside one. Same here — I write in visible triads, but I think we’re wired similarly. Just different languages. Same tension.
Thanks for reading mine. I read yours. We may be standing in different corners, but we’re in the same room.
Holy smokes, this one got my blood pressure going! All the feels! My goodness!
I'm sorry! I wasn't trying to jeopardize anybody's health. It was 2am and my common sense had shut off. 😅 Thank you. Imposter syndrome was kicking my ass this morning. Or maybe it was the 3 hours of sleep. Who knows? 🤷♂️
Hello, I hope you’re doing well. I’m a professional artist specializing in comics, NSFW arts (18+), sci-fi, romance , fantasy, book covers, and character design. I’m looking for commissions..I can help turn your novel into a comic also i work on covers, logos, pages, panels, and also adult works. Can I show you my works???